SHORT SENTENCES

13 Jan

Don’t try to impress with long sentence that go on and on and on and never ever ever ever end the sentence such that by the time I get to the end of the sentence I do not even remember what the sentence is about because it runs on and on and on …  are there three commas in your sentence how about splitting it into two nice short sentences it would be so much nicer if you would write in the active tense and just “Say it as it is!”

WRITE IN THE ACTIVE TENSE.  DO NOT TRY TO IMPRESS.  SAY WHAT YOU MEAN. MEAN WHAT YOU SAY. 

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